Wording tweaks and reordering

Installation-on-ReMarkable.md

@@ -11,29 +11,22 @@ ssh root@10.11.99.1
 ## Installing
 
 ### Installation via Toltec
-1. SSH into your device and install [toltec](https://github.com/toltec-dev/toltec#install-it)
-2. For reMarkable 1:
-```
-opkg install koreader
-```
-3. For reMarkable 2:
-```
-opkg install rm2fb koreader
-```
-4. Edit the default service file to be toltec-compatible:
-```
-sed -i "s|/home/root/koreader/koreader.sh|/opt/bin/koreader|g" /opt/koreader/koreader.service
-```
-5. Copy the service file to the system directory:
+1. SSH into your device and install [Toltec](https://github.com/toltec-dev/toltec#install-it)
+2.
+    - For reMarkable 1: `opkg install koreader`
+    - For reMarkable 2: `opkg install rm2fb koreader`
+
+3. Edit the default service file and copy it to the system directory by running:
 ```
-cp -v /opt/koreader/koreader.service /etc/systemd/system/
+sed "s|/home/root/koreader/koreader.sh|/opt/bin/koreader|g" /opt/koreader/koreader.service > /etc/systemd/system/koreader.service
 ```
-6. Launch KOReader:
+4. Launch KOReader:
 ```
 systemctl start koreader
 ```
-- **Note:** Check for updates from within KOReader as toltec may not have yet indexed the latest release.
-- **Note:** reMarkable firmware updates will delete KOReader's systemd units. Run `toltecctl reenable` and repeat steps 4 and 5 after every firmware update
+- Check for updates from within KOReader as Toltec may not have yet indexed the latest release
+- To return to Xochitl simply exit KOReader
+- reMarkable firmware updates will delete KOReader's systemd units. Run `toltecctl reenable` and step 3 after every firmware update
 
 ### Manual installation
 1. Download the [latest release](https://github.com/koreader/koreader/releases) of KOReader
@@ -62,38 +55,38 @@ systemctl start koreader
 ## Launching
 
 ### Automatic launch
-**Warning:** Make sure KOReader starts successfully before configuring the automatic launch. If both `xochitl` and `koreader` are disabled, your device will be stuck at "reMarkable is starting". Keep a copy of your password in case you need to troubleshoot.
 
-1. SSH into your device and run:
+**Warning:** Make sure `systemctl start koreader` works before proceeding!
+
+To launch KOReader at startup, SSH into your device and run:
 ```
-systemctl disable xochitl
 systemctl enable koreader
+systemctl disable xochitl
+reboot
 ```
-2. Reboot your device
-- To return to Xochitl simply exit KOReader
 
-### Launch with external launcher
+### External launcher
 
-KOReader is supported by the following launchers: [oxide](https://github.com/Eeems/oxide), [draft](https://github.com/dixonary/draft-reMarkable) and [remux](https://rmkit.dev/apps/remux). They can installed via [toltec](https://github.com/toltec-dev/toltec#install-it) e.g. `opkg install oxide`.
+KOReader can be launched by: [oxide](https://github.com/Eeems/oxide), [draft](https://github.com/dixonary/draft-reMarkable) and [remux](https://rmkit.dev/apps/remux). They can installed via [toltec](https://github.com/toltec-dev/toltec#install-it), for example:
+```
+opkg install oxide
+```
 
-### Launch with middle button
-1. SSH into your device and run:
+### Middle button launch
+To launch KOReader by holding down the middle button for 3 seconds, SSH into your device and run:
 ```
 cp -v /opt/koreader/button-listen.service /etc/systemd/system/
 systemctl enable --now button-listen
+reboot
 ```
-2. Reboot your device
-3. While using Xochitl, hold down the middle button for 3 seconds to start KOReader
 
 ## Optional
 
 ### Override System Splashscreens
 
-To use KOReader's screensaver feature for poweroff and reboot events:
-
-1. SSH into your device and run:
+To use KOReader's screensaver feature for poweroff and reboot events, SSH into your device and run:
 ```
 systemctl disable remarkable-shutdown
 systemctl disable remarkable-reboot
-```
-2. Reboot your device
+reboot
+```