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name: Editorial
about: 'Editorial changes: Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move'
title: 'Editorial: [Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move] '
labels: editorial
assignees: ''

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**Which part needs editing?**
Which part of the book needs editing? Filename, line?

**What editing does this need?**
Some options: Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move

**How does it currently read?**
Copy the text that needs editing, if it is small enough

**How should it read?**
Write a recommended solution here, if you can!
